{"id":4932,"date":"2016-07-12T15:53:17","date_gmt":"2016-07-12T10:53:17","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/jworldtimes.com\/old-site\/jwt2015\/?p=4932"},"modified":"2019-11-16T17:05:50","modified_gmt":"2019-11-16T12:05:50","slug":"tips-for-the-essay","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.jworldtimes.com\/old-site\/studykit\/essay\/tips-for-the-essay\/","title":{"rendered":"TIPS for the ESSAY"},"content":{"rendered":"

\"Tips<\/a><\/h1>\n

What are the hurdles in our way to becoming a truly independent state?<\/span><\/h1>\n
    \n
  1. Introduction<\/li>\n
  2. Measures to gauge the independence of a state<\/li>\n
  3. Critical analysis of Pakistan’s 68 years of independence<\/li>\n
  4. Hurdles in our way to becoming a truly independent state:<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n

    The hurdles are of diverse categories, as:<\/p>\n

    I.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Political Hurdles<\/span><\/h3>\n

    a.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Problematic borders
    \nb.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Military domination: an impediment to development of other state institutions
    \nc.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Lack of consensus among politicians on major issues
    \nd.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Perennial issue of terrorism
    \ne.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Shortsighted, imprudent and impetuously-designed foreign policy<\/p>\n

    II.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Administrative Hurdles<\/span><\/h3>\n

    a.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Spineless bureaucracy
    \nb.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Delayed justice
    \nc.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Dishonesty, nepotism and red-tapism
    \nd.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Flawed transparency and accountability mechanisms<\/p>\n

    [AdSense-B] – [AdSense-B]<\/strong><\/p>\n

    III.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Economic Hurdles<\/span><\/h3>\n

    a.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Vicious circle of poverty
    \nb.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Outdated techniques of agricultural farming
    \nc.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Unbridled inflation rate
    \nd.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Undocumented economy
    \ne.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Blind privatization<\/p>\n

    IV.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Religious Hurdles<\/span><\/h3>\n

    a.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Pathetic role of religious icons for power lust
    \nb.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Inculcation of anti-democratic sentiment in the minds of followers and support of dictatorship
    \nc.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Use of religious followers as a pressure group
    \nd.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Unignorable role of religious parties in promoting sectarianism
    \ne.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Inclination toward taqleed rather than ijtihad<\/p>\n

    V.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Social hurdles<\/span><\/h3>\n

    a.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Marginal and unproductive role of women
    \nb.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Class disparities because of feudalism and landlordism
    \nc.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Resistance of general masses to adopting new things
    \nd.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Uncontrolled population growth<\/p>\n

    5.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Can we ever become a truly independent nation? Yes! <\/strong>
    \n6.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Recommendations for removing the hurdles in becoming a truly independent<\/strong> state<\/strong><\/p>\n

    a.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Strengthening democracy by ensuring continuity of credible elections and proper vetting of candidates
    \nb.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Devising meticulous, far-sighted and independent foreign policy
    \nc.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0A complete overhauling of administrative systems
    \nd.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Adopting prudent and visionary economic policies
    \ne.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Enacting of stringent laws to broaden the tax net
    \nf.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Promoting of progressive scholars
    \ng.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Launching of media campaign to change the mindset of society.<\/p>\n

    7.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Conclusion

    <\/div>
    <\/div><\/strong><\/p>\n

    \"Tips<\/a><\/p>\n

      \n
    1. As usual, start the introductory paragraph with a general discussion and gradually narrow down its scope till it finally comes to an end with \u201cThesis Statement\u201d. Give Thesis Statement in an attractive but unambiguous way; clearly defining the scope and limits of the essay.<\/li>\n
    2. While critically analyzing the post-independence history of Pakistan, you should come up with solid arguments suggesting that Pakistan has never been a truly independent state throughout the period. To substantiate your point, do quote examples from the economic sector, foreign policy, military history and social sector. In this part of the essay, your focus should be to imprint a positive image of the depth of your knowledge in the mind of the examiner.<\/li>\n
    3. The fourth main point i.e. \u201cwhat are hurdles in our way to becoming a truly independent state,\u201d is, in fact, the main question asked in the essay. Answer to this question demands a detailed discussion on all the hurdles that have caused Pakistan to remain deprived of true independence. Discussion on this point should be spread over, at least, 10-12 pages. Put up your arguments in an extremely logical way with citation of relevant data, and references of pertinent facts from the history. Always remember that unless you convince the examiner of the depth, accuracy and relevance of your knowledge, you will not be able to secure good marks merely on the basis of linguistic skills.<\/li>\n
    4. While expanding the fifth main point i.e. \u201cCan we ever become a truly independent nation? Yes,\u201d shed light on the brighter side of the picture. In this part, try to prove that we, as a nation, are sufficiently endowed with the potential for getting rid of all the impediments to becoming a truly independent state. Examples from our history as Pakistanis and Muslims would be quoted to corroborate the point. Discussion on this particular aspect may span 2-3 pages. In fact, this is the part where you will be kindling the light of hope for the better future of the country. After the detailed discussion, in the previous part \u2014 on the barriers to our becoming a truly independent state \u2014 in this part, you would disperse the clouds of uncertainty and dismay. It is strictly advisable to end the essay on a note that gives the readers some element of hope and this is what this part of the essay would do.<\/li>\n
    5. Recommendations, as is always advised, should not present a \u201cwish list\u201d; instead, they should be highly practicable and relevant, keeping in view the present circumstances of the country. Each \u201cRecommendation\u201d should be described in a separate paragraph, however, owing to the scarcity of time, last 2-3 recommendations can be summed up in a single paragraph. While recommending corrective measures, do refer to the steps already taken by the government for the amelioration of the situation and the causes of their missing the targets.<\/li>\n
    6. In the concluding paragraph, present a summary overview of all that you have discussed in the whole essay. Here, you should focus on the selection of suitable and impressive vocabulary as it is highly important to leave the examiner with his mind fully convinced of the skill and adroitness of the candidate as far as the art of essay writing is concerned.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n

       <\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

      What are the hurdles in our way to becoming a truly independent state? Introduction Measures to gauge the independence of a state Critical analysis of Pakistan’s 68 years of independence Hurdles in our way to becoming a truly independent state: The hurdles are of diverse categories, as: I.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Political Hurdles a.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Problematic borders b.\u00a0\u00a0 \u00a0Military …<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":572,"featured_media":4933,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":[],"categories":[33,4148],"tags":[4397,4399,4392,4398,4390,4389,4394,4391,4395,4393,4401,4402,4396,4388,4400],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.jworldtimes.com\/old-site\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/4932"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.jworldtimes.com\/old-site\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.jworldtimes.com\/old-site\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.jworldtimes.com\/old-site\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/572"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.jworldtimes.com\/old-site\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=4932"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/www.jworldtimes.com\/old-site\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/4932\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":25799,"href":"https:\/\/www.jworldtimes.com\/old-site\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/4932\/revisions\/25799"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.jworldtimes.com\/old-site\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/4933"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.jworldtimes.com\/old-site\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=4932"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.jworldtimes.com\/old-site\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=4932"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.jworldtimes.com\/old-site\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=4932"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}